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 WWW: Good information, included most of the MIGRAIN key concepts. Good use of pictures and also linked it to contextual research- e.g other TV shows with similar concept.

EB1:  Maybe you could have included less text. Could have gone into more detail on the analysis of the suicide scene.




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