Ignite presentations: Learner response
Feedback- Mr Bush Significance : 4/5 Structure : 4/5 Simplicity : 4/5 Rehearsal : 4/5 Overall : 16/20- 80% WWW: Good textual analysis of the suicide scene- included audience response. The slides were well designed, with good use of gifs. Reference to representation theory, such as Medhurst and Dyer. You explored wider contexts by referring to issues and debates such as youth alienation and psychological issues amongst youngsters. Good reference to Netflix and other texts. You also linked it to new and digital media/ social media. The presentation also covers audience demographics and pleasures. You had a very good conclusion, with reference to your own views. Overall, it was a very methodical approach. EBI: You could have included more background context, and expressed your own views (critical autonomy) on wider issues and debates. There was too much text on ''reading'' slides. You could have also improved your body language (look at the audience). Furthe...
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